All Comments on 'Unsated Hunger'

I wish for more plot

Regardless of what you thought, that ending was way too obvious too be successful. If you can't write finished stories, don't post them.

this story is quite interesting mind adding up to it? also as a constructive criticism... try add more descriptive words on the movement of the female/male groin and the feeling it gives against the other person

Agree would really like to see this continue.

Would recommend getting someone to proof read though as the few errors distracting. Excellent read;-)

These two are worthy opponents. You must give us more, as well as the backstory.

Wow, that was awesome. I loved that story. I'm Vampire obsessed it seems and am always looking for a good vampire story.