All Comments on 'Unseen Halloween'

I caught a few after it posted, I hope they are not bad enough that you don't want to read my works. This tale has me inspired for a few others and when I get them done I will post them. I like where they are going, I will flesh them out some (excuse the pun) Detailed sex scenes are a little bit of my weakness.

Hey Great read..

This was real fun. I hope there we'll be many more. Thanks.

Really enjoyed it would like to see it continue more

Please get an editor… great story but there were a lot of mistakes that would have been caught by another pair of eyes.

More detail to the sexual encounters. It was over with in less than a few lines for most. Draw it out with more description.