All Comments on 'Unspoken Ch. 01'

Good beginning!

5

Good start. Nice rhythm in the narrative

Loved it

Author's note: Unspoken Ch. 02 will post tomorrow. Ch. 03 is scheduled to post on Tuesday the 15th, and Ch. 04 will post on Wednesday the 16th. I submitted all the completed installment at once, but the moderators scheduled their actual posting days one after the other. The first two installments are revisions of the old story. Chapter 5 is currently in the works. I hope everyone enjoys my remastered series!

WOW!!!!!

Please write Chapter 2!!!!!

A wonderful, tender story. looking forward to the new chapters!

Really enjoyed this. Looking forward to continue the reading..

Very well written. I look forward to the continuation

delightful

What a very beautiful story idea with the romance and deafness. The fantasy is too good and fits what we wish were true. Best first time sex could ever be.

Great story! Aimon should have a sexy hairy chest -- it could help to keep Haley warm!

Aimon not speaking makes it even sexier.