All Comments on 'Unspoken Words'

Wheres the rest of it? Did you forget to upload part of it?

Too short. Thanks for your time and imagination.

"which lasted for what seemed like one lifetime."

Just one, not one and a half, or maybe three, but no, just one.

You need an editor, seriously. You have a plot, you have players, you just don't put them together very well. Get an editor to make it readable.

Well although it wasnt THAT bad of a story, the first thing that I noticed was the way you kept claiming how "huge" your cock is... which is a definite sign that the writer is most likely quite small in reality, so tries to over-compensate.

Tell me; do you happen to drive a humongous 4x4 pick-up truck that one almost needs a ladder to reach the cab of? That's another sure sign of someone lacking in length...