All Comments on 'Unspoken Words: Prologue'

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jackfrost626jackfrost626over 9 years ago
cool

Nice start and with so many possible ways the story could go I can't wait to see what to come next

baikalisanbaikalisanover 9 years ago
Nice start!

I hope you continue to write and post quickly!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Extremely short but a good start.

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