All Comments on 'Untethered Pt. 02'

This view of Shaie’s mind is so well done. I loved Unbidden, and I love this too. Can’t wait to see what happens next.

Somehow I'm just now noticing this amazing series. It's beautifully written and hotter than the hinges of hell. . Thank you so much for your hard work, thank you for sharing, and I hope we get to see more of this.

You're not allowed to to place this heartache inside my chest for too long, please post the next story immediately. Immediately!

Pretty please. Thank you.

You're really good in this.. Wrenching our hearts too jamie..

Omg.. Can't wait for the nxt one.. Sakit sa dibdib❤️

i loved the build up in Unbidden and have waited (anxiously)for the continuation and Untethered does not disappoint. Interesting to get Shaie's pov...so arrogant and overconfident but I suspect more fragile than Jamie. Its ironic that Jamie is so hurt by Shae thinking she is still messing with her ex even though she fucked her several times while believing Shae was seeing Lucy! Cant wait for whats next- love your writing

Thank you all so much for your comments! I had a lot of internal debates writing this part (sumakit din dibdib ko), and it's just been really encouraging to read your thoughts about it.

As for Jamie's reaction... while I know her exact reasons, this is one of those things that I'd like to leave open for interpretation. I like knowing how you guys view their characters as well :)

You have me feeling like Ricky Bobby over here, not knowing what to do while I wait in disgruntlement.

Ok, my lack of patience aside, you wrote another fantastic chapter. I’m sure we all know what it’s like to dig yourself into a hole, and out of sheer pride and anger, keep digging that bitch deeper. This story is equally frustrating as it is a joy (and sexy, let us not forget that!). I look forward to the next installment.

Please work on your conversations. It may be clear to you who is speaking but it isn’t necessarily clear to the reader. Your use of paragraphs with conversations also needs a bit of work. I kept trying to figure out who was saying or doing what. Good plot, interesting story.

I love your work so far!

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