All Comments on 'Untitled'

by spookysfamiliar

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hard to read

Paragraphs much-much to long.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Paragraph length doesn't matter!

I enjoyed the story very much! The happy reality of clumsiness and the glory of release is all captured here. Very nice.

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