All Comments on 'Untraceable Ch. 01'

A very exciting beginning, but disappointingly brief, which is why 4 not 5 stars. Please continue.

I think this was a great start to your story. I hope you'll keep it going! Thank you :)

You write wonderfully. I am now hooked. I want more. I want to know what happens next. He sounds sexy even with the little bits of info. Could there be love down the road or is this a one time thing?? Please don't stop. Thank you.