All Comments on 'Untraceable Ch. 02'

You write well -- just carry on like this and you'll be fine. Don't try too hard, let it come to you -- you're doing well.

Thank you for your story and please bring us more of it!

I agree with the previous comment; you do write well! Keep going as you are... More please - hope you will continue with this story.

5*. Jules.

Please keep writing.

I enjoy it, but don't force the writing. It's not a race. The story will come from the actions.

Fantastic writing! You were made for this! Please sir, may I have more? I wish there really was a club such as this!

I found this to be very well balanced between care and connection, and training and discipline. Very well written.