All Comments on 'Unusual Dinner Party'

Awesome, simply awesome.

Thank you so much for sharing it with us. Well done-- five stars.

Very good story, with a final twist and a potential for another chapter.

5 stars

Five stars! One of the best stories ever. Can't wait to see Erica get hers.

Really well constructed story. Hot descriptions. I really liked the internal questioning about how far to go. Looking for more.

One of the best stories I've read !

Great story! Well written and fun to read. Nice story of friends being intimate with friends.

THE manual for how to put your wife's bare body on display.

Somebody ate a huge bowl of stupid for breakfast.....

Very well writen. Hot, very hot. I hope you'll continue at Erica's house. It could be wonderful.

Spanking isn't my thing and I usually prefer the female pov, so this story had some headwinds with me right out of the gate. Despite this I really enjoyed it, which I figure means it was a well written tale.

As others have said, I look forward to the story of Erica's turn as hostess.

This was my first attempt at 1st person writing, so glad to hear it wasn't a complete failure.

Very erotic...A 5 star read! I look forward to the sequel.

I read your story discretely while watching TV with the family. I had to stop 5 times because I was too aroused. I waited until my erection subsided, then resumed reading your marvelous story. I will now head for the other room to finally enjoy that orgasm that's been building for so long.

Best read in a long time! Well written and so sexy! Bravo!

Great story, dinner at Erica's place turns into a weekend orgy.

What a great story! It turned me on so much, I had my husband spank me while he read the story out loud. Ended with me having an orgasm like the ones in the story. I'd like to act out the whole scenario at our next dinner party.

oh i fondled my own lips and cunt while reading the story imagining myself instead of Ann.. finale shud hv been mark and fred fucking her too

Wonderful development throughout the story and an excellent setup for part II.

Part 2 at Erica's would be great.

I love this! It got me so hot I had to find my damn vibrator since my hubby wasn't home, whew! Thanks so much!!

There's a few typos and editing errors ("massing her cheeks.") but very well done on the whole. I have no interest in spanking, so was very surprised to find myself quite aroused by this story. Nice!

I didn't think I would make it passed a page not being a fan of spanking, well not until now ! Your smooth style kept me reading, and the next thing you know I was feeling the burn if you know what I mean. I just kept reading to see where it would go, and l wasn't disappointed. Great story .... I would love to see you do a non-consent / reluctance.

I have been reading the stories on this site for a while now and I have to say I loved this and agree with everyone else, there are another two stories to be told, dinning at Erica's and maybe a pool party or lunch at Linhs

Very nicely done!

Oh- My- Gourd! Got better and better, and then it went thermal hot. IMO,

1) yes, it'd be awesome to have the next dinner party at Erica's and see her "get hers"...

2) too many people kept too many clothes on once aroused... shoulda, coulda "enjoyed" themselves more...

and

3) Linh enjoyed herself enough, her own personal Pandora's box is about to pop open and she'll be almost (we could hope) insatiable and want to show and share herself.

Great story. Thought that the twist actually took away from the eroticism, but that's just me.

A while back, my (ex)girlfriend and I discovered how much she enjoyed being spanked as "punishment" for little infractions, very much as in your story. She was even a lawyer! A combination of embarrassment, shame, and erotic excitement all wrapped up together. Oh how she would clench her bare cheeks in anticipation of the next "smack"! Of course, we never shared it with others, but it was hot, for both of us, to tell her "I should spank you in front of your friends". Thanks for great read, and for bringing back the memories.

My very sexually submissive companion finally believes other ladies get off in this manner as well as her

Well served!!! Can't wait til the next dinner party. I loved how this story stuck to the title... "UNUSUAL" The fact that no one undressed made the whole story unusual and I loved this odd twist in the story.

I couldn't stop reading. Just gave my first 5 star rating. Whether you make this a series or not, very solid writing indeed.

It would have been a lot better if it had turned out to be a fuckfest.

A

Je n'ai pa pu le lacher.

I was not able to stop reading.

I'm dripping in my panties this story is so good. Must touch myself. Now!

Makes me wet wanting more

I've read this story several times and keep coming back...

Why? Because of all the many stories I've read here, this one is the absolute best, bar none!

I loved this story - just came back to reread it. I'm hoping you consider a second part

My fantasy word for word.

I usually have no interest in "spanking" stories. This was incredibly erotic and held my attention throughout. Speaking of attention...

Not in to spanking but what an amazing story....would love to experience the same.with my beautiful wife.

Thanks everybody for the encouraging comments. The story has been nominated for the 2016 Literotica Awards in the Exhibitionist/Voyeur category. Please visit http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1443230 to read nominations and vote.

This story was a deserving winner of the 2016 contest in its category (it got my vote), although it faced some good competition. Excellent story! Congrats.

You are quite skilled at taking this tale from a quiet secret hidden pleasure to scandalous exploits.

I didn't expect all of that. What a marvellous story. More editing at the end of page 4 could have been useful, but it wouldn't (couldn't) have made it better.

Loved the ending...and even though I would LOVE a sequel, this story is a masterpiece that doesn't need one.

of course I gave it a five!

Would have been a better story without the bi sexual aspect. Belongs in gay section. Gave it two stars because of that.

One of the best stories I've read! It took all the self control I had to not cum before I finished the story. I've never squirted before but with how wet I am now I may have well had.

I feel like I either need a cold shower or make plans for my own dinner party. That was hot.

wow its mindblowing, one of the most erotic stories i've read

Would love to have u write my wife into the next story!!

That was hugely arousing - well done. 5 stars!

Damn that was hot...u make me want to have a dinner party now

I love reading this erotic story, it's so achingly arousing...

This story was written with such intense eroticism and focus, it kept me hungry for more. What a hot dish to serve at a dinner party...

Eroticism at its zenith...perfect pace...couldn’t tell how far things were going to go...looking forward to the party with Erica as the hostess...

Very nice, I loved it

I shall enjoy exploring your other tales

Loved the story

I would love to hear what happened at the next "Dinner Party"

Well written - rolled along well - looked forward to more

Such an erotic story, I would love to read more, I’d love to be invited to their dinner parties too.

Tess (UK)

This takes me back to my 21st birthday. I had to much to drink was feeling bold I am a tom boy. I am the only girl out of the 4 of us. Some of the people wanted to spank me for my birthday. I told them no way in hell. I would kick all their ass. Will I found out I was to drunk to fight them off they had me bend over a chair and was spanking me really hard. As they keep hitting me harder and harder some of them said pull her dress up she not feeling them. All I on under my dress was a G String. They spanked me until my ass was red. I did not tell them I was loving it. I am now married and my husband always spank me on my birthday I wish he would do it more but I don't want to ask him to. Keep riding I want to hear more dinner party spanking.

After my wife and i read this story, we had great sex! She was wetter than normal and asked for a few spanks. A real turn on for both of us.

I plan to read it again with my wife later. Thanks!!!

One of the best stories I've ever read. Keep up the great work.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! :)

Great, great story please follow with moreof the same couple becoming more unhinged in group situations with group play & more uninhibited dirty talk from Anne!

Love, love, love you this story, very hot 🔥 please keep writing along the same line. I love being in this situation, vulnerable and submissive, used for the pleasure of others perversions.

I can only agree. Great story. really hoping there is a part two coming.

One of my all time favorites, so a specific comment is long overdue.

I loved your brilliant use of the imaginative plot twist involving the misdirected email, which set up the premise very effectively. I also enjoyed the deliberate pace and steady increase in erotic tension.

Sorry I couldn't vote for the contest, but I wasn't old enough to enjoy this site at that time. However, now I am contemplating how to arrange a dinner party for several couples at my apartment.

Oh my

The thought of a gang bang never appealed to me before, now you've got me imagining my own dinner party.

Extremely well written, love the slow build. It's going to take me a while to come down after that one.

Amazing story

Nice little twist at the end. Hope there is a follow up at Erica's. Very compelling story, a pleasure to read with a nice balance of character build and erotic action.

Wow, great story telling! Loved the precise descriptions and the tension buildup. I was hoping for a massive orgy at the end. Maybe a sequel???

Raunchy in the best way. You should continue the story at the next party at Erica's house. Erica would have her girlfriends service all the males.

Wonderful story. Do you plan to revisit this? A part 2 would be great..

Beautiful pace in the way you increased the intensity, leading to an explosive ending.

Loved it. Would like to see this story with this group of friends developed further. Something very erotic and exciting about living out sexual awakening and fantasy with spouse and friends.

Loved this, wishing my friends would plan a night like this. Can't wait to read what happens at Erica's!!

What a wicked story. The ending clutched it for me. She wanted to do these things after all! Surely the stuff of fantasy only, but what a deliciously wet dream.

excellent, all started as a mistaken text and flowed smoothly.

Would love to read more stories like this, but I haven't found any as well-written.

Great story….5 stars

Borderline cuckold but not enough to ruin it for me. This one also rated a firm 5 stars, gladly given.

I’d really like to see a movie based on this. Would be rated 5 stars also. Made me wish my antidepressant meds didn’t take away my ability to orgasm. ☹️

This was sooo hot, I almost came thrice. Just one thing, if there was a similar tits spanking round before the blowjob, I would have come 8-10 times. This was very very hot. My heart beat is still high while writing this.

I realize this is an older story but still hoping for a follow up.

Hated it and loved it at the same time. Angle on one solder Devil on the other; like her husband. Very good exhibitionist/embarrassment/humiliation/submissive (EEHS) category. Complete fantasy. Some violence, the spanking and submissive sex; that was the point of this fantasy. Empathy for Ann; apathy from her husband. the others. I do not like the character Erica; to much dominance over the others especially Ann, even though this was Ann's fantasy. Should have ended with the stripping of Ann and serving her guest naked for the remaining dinner. Chuckling as they left down the hallway, no way, they are not Ann's friends. Second chp Ann gets revenge on Erica at her dinner hosting.

Loved it great story which turns on the heat further at each chapter

Needs to continue

Liked it 4 stars. I did have to speed read it. Will go back and read it completely at my speed and try not to speed read through it. Some thoughts, I would have not included the explicit sex, not needed, takes away from the erotic nature of the story. Please continue story. Erica needs a pay back, her husband should set it up. Must of these people are not her friends or it would have stopped before the stripping. Stay with the spanking, keep it simple. The people should leave as friends, essentially Ann and her husband lost four so called "friends" till Ann gets some payback from Erica. Make that story #2.