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Click hereShe is mine. I'll never let her go. She will never leave me.
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You comment, ergo you exist.
I think there will be another break now, before the next Unwanted Obsession chapter. (As always, no promises. I can't say for sure whether I'll be able to pull my imagination out of that universe quite yet.)
Thankyou to the author. I have read this over and over for years and I will read this forever I wonder if he will impregnate her and make her his baby factory. He would have to control his violent side. Worried for her life at this point. Love is dangerous. Boop. I hope you finish this. Till then let's all write the ending in our dreams tonite. Dream sexy dreams!
I know I’ve heard about many people adding to long neglected fics out of boredom in this pandemic. It would be nice if that happened here (or if you wrote more noncon in general because yours is great.
I must say the best part about this non con is the beating. Not many linger on that part which is incredibly arousing. I would have to ask my roleplay writing partner to beat me, because to most it just don't come naturally.
So sad to return to your page time and again and to find out that you’ll probably never finishing this. What a pity
This is, definatly, an interesting story :-) - hvor kommer mon alt det danske fra..?
Thats, definatly, giving it another twist - personally I’m not Big on rape stories, but more into Ds with a sadistic twist, but I’m, for sure, gonna follow this one if you ever write more - its really well written.
Thank You :-)
Bastarden
Please, I have read over these twice now and love this twisted story. you atleast need to finish it better. give some answers.
She's not really happy so this wasn't really a great ending I read all six chapters in one night hoping for them to find a mutual ground and for her to feel something positive and good for him in the end and there was none of that and I know that you forewarned us about what kind of story this would be but I don't find it pleasurable are happy that it ended this way maybe somebody else will and I appreciate your submission but for me it was just kind of sad I felt bad for both of them I felt bad he couldn't feel love or empathy for her and that he was selfish in taking her and I felt bad that her fear never subsided enough to see his softer side and that he never showed it to her
Who the hell would find this story a turn on? Someone with deep disturbances. To the writer, you a genuinely a sick individual. Get some help.
It's so dark and engaging. I find most stories I like on this site with a level of non consent are either, a) the aggressor obtains real love for the female in the story (Such as in 'Love...and Love Intensely' or B) the aggressor merely uses the girl for his pleasure and hurts her and takes pleasure in that. (such as in 'Fun with Cindy') But this story masterfully takes a well put together psychopathic money genius and makes him almost likable (at least likable by me) Instead of being on one side of the spectrum or the other,as the aforementioned stories are, it walks a line in between . I just love this story and the characters so much, Ronald and 'Lowish' are characters I want to see progress more in their new life. I often reread this story and am just now feeling compelled to leave a comment (in grasping hope you see it and are inspired to write more.)
I am commenting, and I hope it isn't in vain. You need to finish this story. I know it is hard to finish something like this gracefully. But you have to do it. Do it for me. I commented. ;)
I love it! Found the story and read it all the way through and I'm so frustrated that it stopped here! I love how dark it's been, getting to see inside Ronald's obsessive mindset and Louise's struggle to fight against what her body wants but her mind doesn't. I've enjoyed it so much and I really hope you write chapter 7! I totally get needing to be in the mindset for it though, I'm the same way with my writing. Please please continue it though!