All Comments on 'Unwilling Ch. 04'

I'm always happy when I see another chapter of this story posted and I loved how Jared finally convinced Darwin to see reason. It gets more exciting with each chapter. I hope Harry doesn't get hurt.

takes so long for new chapters tho

Yes, it does. And I won't be able to speed it up - I'm sorry for that, but every writer has their own speed, and mine is pretty slow, unfortunately ;D

Can't wait to see what happens next and Jared give Carl what he is long overdue or maybe it will be George?? I think that would be justice personally...

I have full faith in Jared saving Harry before Carl gets his hands/paws on him too can't wait

This is a fun series and I was so excited to see a new chapter. The fact that you are writing this in a second language is unbelievable and I admire your work. Thanks for sharing your gift with us here.

Can't wait till the next chapter...

So while his best friend is being held captive about to be harmed instead of devising a plan they are having sex. Seriously. What amazing friends.

You said this was the last?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

This CAN'T be the last chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Your an amazing writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE continue!!!!!

Hope there is more. I enjoyed this series!!

It's a great story! you should finish it! :)

Please give us more....

Please finish!!

Please! I'm dying here...

I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter(s)! Please post them soon!

I'm glad you're continuing it.

Please give us the last chapter.. Looking forward to the end.

you can't just leave it here. this story is great, and deserves an ending. please?

Please don't just leave us hanging. You need to finish this story, it;s that good.

I hope the next chapter is coming soon - I'm really enjoying the story (won't enjoy it so much tomorrow at work, after only four hours sleep, but I couldn't stop reading it!)

This is really exciting.

Just loving the story line

I hope Darwin's dad is ok

Is that it...???

Ok, who tore out the last chaper/page?

where is the rest of the story?

It's rude to leave people hanging, what happens to Harry?

Does Carl get his just deserts?

Please finish this story. It's been over a year since you last posted a chapter.

Update soon.

I love this story.

Just read her blog, she plans to continue both Shapeshifter and Unwilling before moving on this is as of Febuary 2014.

Please, please, please tell me that you will continue this story!!! I have to know what happens. This story is incredible!! We are all waiting for the next chapter.

Not cool to leave your Literotica fans without a finished story and proceed to publish the same story on another site. Did you finish the story? Will we be able to read the final chapter on Gay Authors or will you leave those fans hanging also. You are a good author with an exciting story and it really is unfair to not finish what you start. It is very frustrating to follow a story and years later still have no resolution.

The cliffhangers...no, just no