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by PinkyDinky

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visioneervisioneerabout 9 years ago

Nicely written - sensuous and erotic. You did a good job with the way the narrator pushed through her lover's anger to intimacy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Yes Please

Beautifully written. I could easily imagine myself in this story.

BicuriousJoyBicuriousJoyabout 9 years ago
fantasy

I hope to live this exact senior at the right time. Your thinking is delicious.

DeborahCartierDeborahCartierabout 9 years ago
Gorgeous

I too would just love to act this out. What a beautiful story.

Xxxxx

Deborah

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