All Comments on 'Unwrapping Presents is Fun!'

I like your easygoing, frank style of writing. Good luck in the contest!

Your writing style makes the story flow and a nice romantic story it is. Thank You. Ronnie W.

loved the story, loved the guy, eventhough the dialog at the end was such an anti climax

Excellent as ever - keep it up

Very fun and romantic story, Alex. It made me smile. Good luck in the contest.

Have to echo Sack... & I really admire your

skill in showing the "story", not the "author"...

something I need to learn ; )

Best of luck in the contest!

No way! Nice work. Happy holidays & good luck in the contest! ~Imp

realize your own talent. Great story, wonderfully told. Good luck in the contest.

Surprise, a loving romantic story about two people who really care about each other. Thanks author, when I read stories like this it restores my faith in people and writers. It's shocking to read a wonderful story without wimps, pimps, sluts etc, just romance and sex. What a pleasure! Thanks again, 60 year old George

A talented rolling flowing touch of warm fuzzy fun with respect for all - them, us and you - very credible Author - not that it matters but Another little red "h" will appropriately land soon.

You are appreciated - With High Regard

What a pleasant adventure of romance and a rekindling of affecton between two lonely souls. Well written and flowing. Thank you

This story was a pleasure to read. Nice to go from the wreck, to the cabin, to the two sharing each other. Keep up the good work, your talent for writing is definitely appreciated.

Great story :) Very romantic, but at the same time hot. Sometimes you just want to make soft, sweet love and that's what this story is. A pleasurable break from everyday fucking. I loved it.

Happy Holidays! Good luck in the contest,

Ali

Alex, IMHO, this was an easy-to-read, well-handled piece of storycraft. I'd say keep up the good work, but you always do anyway.

Rumple

It was hot, romantic and expertly handled. Every aspect of this marvelous tale was perfect. I was thinking that perhaps if I drove along some back roads, I might find someone to rescue. What do you think my chances are?

Alex,

You don't need us to tell you how wonderfull all this was, snow, holidays, kindness, humour and sex! All in a wonderful story, you'll keep it up, even if I don't tell you to.

Good luck in the contest

John

and well-crafted too!

You've captured nicely the joy of being stranded with someone you care about. I had the pleasure a long time ago, and there's something very special about the experience. It reads like you've had it as well, and if you haven't it's an even more remarkable piece of work. Well done

The character development was outstanding and the location helped the scenario to be very believable. I like this guy's writting. It flows nicely and makes one wonder if it could be worked into an illustrated story with pictures...?

Speaking of illustrated, that just sounds HOT! Like this one for example: http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=35663&page=submissions

Ok, ok. Just think about it, alright? :)

before writing my own because most of the feelings, emotions, and expressions that crossed my mind have been used by others before me. I agree with them! As I read this story, I had the thoughts of how much Alex's writing has progressed from 2000 until now (late 2005). His stories have always been fun to read and covered diverse situations, but now they flow better, have better dialogue, draw the reader into the drama so one feels a part of the action. I know that many times I have thought that "this is the best one yet" and then I read the next one and I think it again. As in this story, it had all the elements the others have mentioned and seemed real - it could have happened! Alex's use of picture-words and word pictures make his stories, particularly this romantic interlude, much more erotic than any video porn scene. It was a pleasure to read this and Alex's other works. Thanks.

Great mix of adventure, real stress and real attraction. Classic setting of course, and so what? If it works, use it!!

I enjoyed the story and the slow build up to the final conclusion of making love!

***** Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

Your creation is Excellent.

THANK YOU !

Scott