All Comments on 'Unyielding Competition'

That was intense. Really depressing. I was swept into the misery and imagery as I read the story. I'm so happy he had the strength to leave him in the end.

Great story.

up/down/ black/white in/out loved the dichotomy, contrast, use of words together, to make the opposite as true as the converse

loved this quip

'Because I was not the high school boy he had sat next to in chemistry. With whom he had no chemistry'

'I smell the diesel of them and the bus station already'