All Comments on 'Up and Down in the Elevator'

Good story. Good premise, set up, dialogue, and of course sex, though I think the actual sex could have been longer, but as it is its very good, especially for a new author. Keep writing!

Sorry I meant to rate 5 but my finger slipped :/

That story was sooooo sexy - hope you continue

I really enjoyed this story!!! The only thing was you ended it too quickly. Keep up the good work. Cant wait to read more from you.

I want to see these two in a relationship.

but it adds to the mystery.

and the fun.

I'd love to see another round between these two. Who knows? Maybe they'd even become a couple, and we'd get to see just what "everything" could be. Great story! Very hot and very sweet!

Another nicely written piece BrownBeauty.

Dirty enough without going overboard.

I love how you squeeze in the odd one liner - could be a Humerous one or descriptive ' pinned like a butterfly ' !

These little touches do work wonders.

Like many other reader, I'd too would like them to get to the ' anything ' stage.

Do write soon.

Damn! I’m late to the show but glad I arrived! 👏 great story