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transientartstransientartsalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Before anyone points it out, the name was Mark Jack Fredrickson. That's why I use both Jack and Mark

Maximillion_VentresMaximillion_Ventresalmost 3 years ago

Just finished. Interesting start. Will Caleb find love? Was the cheating boyfriend named Jack or Mark? It's is a great start. The only criticism I have is the back and forth between metric and Imperial measurements. It only happens a little so it should be a problem. 5 ⭐ because I can't wait for the next chapter!

Montgomery QuinnMontgomery Quinnalmost 3 years ago

The beginnings of a romance, born from yet another heartbreak. I do love a tragic romance, even if this isn't my usual category to read. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The bouncing between Jack and Mark was very distracting. Even if his name was Mark Jack (really?) he wouldn’t alternate between them. Sloppy.

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