All Comments on 'Up in the Mountains'

4*

Five stars. And unusually for a first effort, very few grammatical errors.

This is a great story and I hope to see more!!! Thank You for sharing!

I couldn't believe my eyes when I read this was a first post. You obviously are very talented.

Please continue what I believe will become an excellent series.

Great story! I voted 5 for you. agree with other commenters that for a first time post is is very easy to read and free of grammatical errors. One I spotted was you used past instead of passed. Look forward to more stories from you!

A great start, looking forward to the next chapter

Good work, nice detail and an adventure that should have legs to progress. I think your couple has just begun their journey and we’d love to join them on the way!

Please continue writing - I enjoyed it

I really enjoyed this story and for your first one it’s incredible. I hope you keep writing because if this is the quality I can expect then I know I won’t be disappointed.

The only thing to say is looking forward to more.

I don't think it's really a Romance, but it sure could be with a follow up chapter or two.

I really enjoy the detail that you put into the story and especially the setting. I had fun reading the story. Well done!

Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.

Wonderful storytelling. Reminded me of when I backpacked Europe in my younger days. I too was wagging way too much. And the location reminded me of the latter days in the novel A FAREWELL TO ARMS.

Great start! It is a good story and well written - bravo!

Very sweet and sexy. Bravo!