All Comments on 'Upgrade Ch. 01'

Man that was a great great story please give more.

Great

going to get his hard very fat cock up the same wet warm cunt he came out of. I bet that the gifted author, 18 to 22 years old, was hard when he wrote this series, and that he shot out a good healthy load from his hot young balls at the end. LDIK has a marvelously dirty mind, much like his hero Matt. More stories from this talented writer, please, about boys, their mother's mommy-hole, and where their creamy semen really belongs.

Dude, what an insult to your readers. You post it up and we either like it or we don't. I don't even know if I'll bother with chapter 2.

Why does a 20 yr old need to ask his Mom permission to spend the weekend with his girlfriend.

Can wait for upgrade ch 3

How about the mom fattens up the girl friend? Need some more weight gain/bbw stories around here.

I like where this is going anything can happen the mom could suddenly drop all that weight with excercise or surgery or she could do any number of sexual things but I'm betting she makes herself stunning and steals her son from his girlfriend

350lb women not sexy

I think chapter two will be a better judgement of the story.

The story has my inerest, but I can't wrap my mind around a 350 pound woman being erotic.

Perhaps the author will find a way to make the story work.

Thanks for the post.

keep up the good work on edge here

Can't wait for part two.

Great story please continue

Here is one more vote to continue. Maybe the next chapter could be a little longer?

Won't be reading the 2nd part as this is way off the charts.!*

Yery well done. I'm waiting for the second chapter.

I'm looking forrward to more.

A good start. Wondering if the son will overpower the mother both physically and mentally or will it be the other way around.... Good luck with the plot where ever it goes. Pete

A bit short but a great beginning.

Ok you got my attention, keep writing.