All Comments on 'Upon a Savage Shore Ch. 02'

Interested in how this plays out. Good job.

This was thoroughly enjoyable to read but it seemed to end all too quickly even with the 3 pages. Very easily worth 5 stars. I'm looking forward to reading many more chapters. Thank you for sharing.

I enjoyed the first chapter but found it to be too short for my liking. This was much better in that the entire situation has been set up and now you can go in whatever direction you wish.

I laughed at the predicament with the young female and the misunderstandings in translation. Something tells me that the larger females may end up playing a similar role, especially if they are all trapped on this planet for any length of time. Could prove to be very interesting.

I liked both chapters although ch.1 was a little short. Keep writing and it will turn out 2 be a gr8 series. We will be waiting 4 more 😉

I'm enjoying this so far. Interested in seeing where it goes. And why did my mind jump several marooned yrs ahead and picture several litters of half human/half 'kitties' :-D

Keep up the good work. I hope the rest of the story stays true to the previous chapters. It is better to have short well written chapters than something that is rushed and poorly presented.

Some much like a K'zin story I read a long time ago. Excellent!

Is it bad that I'm thinking "Halo meets thundercats"?

I like the detail you put into the props and environment. Enough to make the reader think about it, but not so much that it drowns the story in unimportant details. I think the encounter (not the combat portion, but the joining of the two sides) was a tad bit on the simplistic side, but easily forgiven.

I do hope you continue to update this story. Would you care to share your anticipated update rate/schedule? The first two chapters came out quick, implying they were both already written when you chose to submit the first, can we expect several more to be released in the next week or two?

Hey I was just curious how often the updates are going to be, I don't want to wait years like the K'tha story. Also did you pull any influence from that story, they seem really similar and I'm just a curious person.

length was much better, so was the situation setup. You do a great job at description and dialogue is cool.

I like where this is going keep up the good work.

good storyline. nice flow. i like the subject matter. so far i rate this series 5 star.

Now I am hooked! Thanks for the treat!

As the last post says, I'm hooked :)

Jason

I was floundering looking for a story like this, i read The Missing Dragon, Succubae Sedduction and The Path of the Necromancer. This in my humble opinion is up there with those incredible stories. love it so far

JC

this a fun tale very interesting you are an imaginative writer

Getting interesting. I've been interested in Sci Fi since I was a kid. The first 'real' book I ever read was "20 thousand leagues under the sea". In my pre-teen and teens I was well into a lot of sci fi and sword and sorcery as well as more hard sci fi. Lots of author names come to mind.

Survival in adverse/alien areas as well as Alt universe and modern people stuck in different times or universes have always been favorites.

This story hits a lot of buttons. Well done so far.

Makes for a pretty nice start and love the cultural confusion to help show that they aren't just like humans like many aliens end up in stories.

For the person that commented it reminded them of a Kzinti story from Larry Niven's Known Space series it does have a starting flavor of the story that got compiled into a small novel known as Cathouse, set during one of the periods of Man-Kzinti wars (Which is where the original two shorter stories were published in the anthologies before compiled into their own book).

Glad I have found this little gem.

I like it!

Thank you again for sharing your work of art.

5+ stars!

What a tough break, having so much to be responsible for the care and handling of so much pussy, err, jZav'Etch, lol.

Great read! I am looking forward to reading more of the series. Please keep it going and thank you for your efforts.

This new world is being explained well and i appreciate that

Yep, will burn through the pages with much glee. So far it's drawn me in and the level of detail was wonderful

Intriguing, I’m hooked.😀