All Comments on 'Upstairs, Downstairs'

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clistenovenaclistenovenaalmost 7 years ago
Weaving Together

"She was a new hire and was already terrified of him. Good, that was part of his job."

An outstanding beginning that sheds light on a bit more of this intriguing set of connectedness you have going. Please say there will be more?

"And please don't tell me

Perhaps, perhaps, perhaps"

SeanBurns1975SeanBurns1975almost 7 years agoAuthor
More?

A million times I've asked you

And then I ask you over again

You only answer

Perhaps, perhaps, perhaps

plumberdonplumberdonalmost 7 years ago
Being a maid

What a beautiful beginning. This story has to have another part, it can't leave us hanging like this. Well done and I loved this part. Thanks

gotranegotranealmost 7 years ago
Ready For The Next Chapter!

Nice start! A little abrupt on the ending, but still both palatable and enjoyable Can't wait for the follow-up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Yes!

More to come?

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