All Comments on 'Upward Ambition Ch. 06'

love the story thus far. Hot. It is kind of hard to believe that a man like that would be vulnerable in front of someone he sees as just a "fuck toy." Though he does have an obsession with control, derek is far too possessive for him to feel nothing at all. Maybe I just don't understand that type of person.. Lol I'm over thinking this. Please keep up the good work, looking forward to more chapters

I love this!

Ooh please give me more!!! I also want to see Kevin or whatever his name is take a fall!

Loving this story. Jacks struggle to accept what he wants deep down and Rhe little hints of something growing between him and Derek. Looking forward to more

Please update.

Love your story !! I live for Derek's revenge on Kevin and his relationship with Jack.

I hope this story will get updated soon 👀

LOL, I'm rereading these more slowly and with more attention to the details, while awaiting the next installment, and I just wanted to let you know that this is possibly the first time I've had a vocabulary enhancement (for a nonsexual word) from erotica. So TIL what "marmoreal" means.

Well, Jack finally gets some aftercare after being beaten, raped, and clamped. All of the previous beatings and rapes, there was no aftercare at all. I am finally seeing that there is no hope for Jack and he is becoming a hopeless painslut for Derek (as evident by his just getting spanked and enjoying it in his own place). I am still kind of hopeful that Jack will become more confident in himself and will asked to be used by Kevin to help Derek get retribution/revenge on Kevin for Kevin's earlier rape of Derek.

i love how you described this chapter as "less heavy" hahaha anyways i love this story!!