by wirtydord
Great !! As always!
I really like how each of them describes the other's body, unfortunately I'm as clueless as jack when it comes to Derek's mind though I still hope Derek won't share him, I think he's far too possessive for that.
Groves seems like bad news perhaps he's also working for kevin?
I always look forward to your writing!
Sensual and emotional! I just love the way you tell such a dark compelling story! Take your time and keep it up!
I always look forward to your writing!
Sensual and emotional! I just love the way you tell such a dark compelling story! Take your time and keep it up!
I always look forward to your writing!
Sensual and emotional! I just love the way you tell such a dark compelling story! Take your time and keep it up!
I always look forward to your writing!
Sensual and emotional! I just love the way you tell such a dark compelling story! Take your time and keep it up!
Omfg i love this series, i was checking ur submissions page since the last chapter was released, and i am so happy now.
Ahhh moreee, u r very talented wirtydord, this is the best thing i have ever read here
Damn Derek is hilariously insane, i wish their relationship would develop more though
Hope you still plan on continuing this! Really want to see where their relationship goes.
This is all I have to say: thank you for not ruining it. I love what you've done with this story. Most importantly, you stayed true to noncon. You didn't ruin it. I don't find a lot like that. 10/10
Wait! Surely, that can't be the end? I love this story and the characters. Please continue!
Ahhhhh i bookmarked this page to keep checking for the new chapter every now and then i almost squealed when i saw the "ch. 9 NEXT CHAPTER"
I haven't read it yet but
THANKS FOR MAKING MY DAY BETTER. <3
I do not become obsessed with things that easily but this...omg i waited for so long, i better read the new chap now
And btw wirtydord, please consider posting on Archive of Our Own too.
He's reluctant for sure and his punishment deserved. It could be more elaborate and tortured in how Jack gets treated but for a short tale it's good. very good.