All Comments on 'Urban Legend'

Very good! I didn't think a girl-on-girl story would get me this hot! Great writing and the length was perfect. Can't wait to read more of your stories. Btw, love the kitty! :) xxxooo

WOW!!! That was hot!!

I gave you a 75, because you need to slow down and proofread a little more. Your word usage of 'peek, and peak' are backwards, and there were a few other words that were misued. When her pussy was stretched 'taunt', should have been 'taut'.

This was a very good story, and that is high praise as I am NOT into girl on girl action. I almost backed out of reading the whole thing, but your writing style kept my interest. Perhaps having a second person proof your story will help you polish it up to perfection.

I enjoyed the character development, and Madison's slow surrender. That was a very nice touch!!

I gave you 100 because the last guy gave you 75. Why do I care how you spell peak or peek? Just get more story on Literotica. It's so hot. I hate those who nit pick things.

loved it! nice details & build-up!

That was extremely hot. I usually don't get off on girl-on-girl stories like this one, I use porn for that, far more visual. But you did an excellent job. Would love to see a follow up.

i just want to say that i am in no way into girl on girl stuff usually, it just doesn't appeal to me, but this was HOT and i loved it

I loved this story.

You're a better writer than this crappy story. It could have been a great story. But you did it a disservice.

A little long but worth it.

ohhh gosh! i love this.. mmmmm!

just amazing story!!!!!!!!!!

you are a GOD writer

plz comeback