All Comments on 'Urgent'

this is bait and switch, we don't want to read this disgusting shit.

It is lesbian sex, in the lesbian sex category. What part of this did you not think was clearly labeled?

First commenter must've been high. This is a very good, albeit short, lesbian story. How come I never see (or hear) girls doing this at the bars where I go? Huh? Well, I'm happy for these two, but I wonder what the other women using the restroom in the meantime are thinking?

Thanks for a good hot scene.

Good and hot. Suspends disbelief.

Incredibly hot and believable. And yes, it does happen. I know because I've been there. Not once, twice, but three times thus far. Not in an all girl bar but in any bar, club, supper club, restaurant, lounge, it doesn't matter. Location is irrelevant. It's a state of mind. An out of mind and body experience. Once again, you've described and captured this phenomenon perfectly. My temperature is rising.

Loving the details. you shouldnt have ended it there. reminds me of me and my girlfriend but she hasnt done me like that in a while. but she has done that to me over ten-fifteen times :}

Some people really screw up urgent(no pun intended) one-shot quickies like this. Not you. One of the best that I've seen that's been able to have me horny by the time it even reaches the quicky.

Wow that's done the trick for me, thanks night night xx

Dude you have got some really good original stuff, well done.

Its as good as it gets, my pussy is has wet as its ever been, more please

awesome work that was amazing

"…we must love each other…

..love is caring for the other...

…in the same earth we all live…

… a great part of love is forgiveness… "

I love this story!

Please don't stop here with this story. Can you please make several parts to this story. You have got me so wet! I need more of it . Just to keep me aroused !

Is there anyway you can do more of this story ?! I can't get enough, you have got me so wet everytime I read your story!!!!! More please !!!!