by StrongMaster7
I see quite a few entries . some stories seem like naturals for follow and there are s few but I don't see many actual serial stories.
Sometimes i feel things develop too fast. Not supposed to write 200 pages in this genre but when the response doesn't seem to suit the stimulus it jars the flow.
I think you have the knack which is necessary you just have to learn to develop it and present it differently.
All that sounds negative but I wouldn't comment if there seemed to be nothing there.
Hi, it's me, Strongmaster7. I am happy that so many people like this story. It is one of my goals as a male author to write stories that appeal to female readers. I appreciate getting comments from females readers, but most are anonymous, and I would welcome any PMs from ladies so that we could exchange a few ideas and I could improve the quality of the stories I write. (Yes, this is a transparent attempt to get contact with female Lit members.) :)
Hope this is just the 1st in a series with Kara ... maybe not with the same leading man but more with her please!
Ooooh, that one was HOT. He gave it to her big time and showed her who was large & in charge.