All Comments on 'Utter Love'

This is a truly wonderful piece of work. Beautifully written, with thoughtful, well paced dialog and well developed, believable characters. I enjoyed it very much (and I haven't enjoyed a whole lot in this category recently). Thank you.

I wish my brother had been this hot before leaving for college! Great job with the pantie fetish.

Well written, especially the first 2/3. Do not release the tension too quickly . It shows what can be done with a very common plot line if it is treated with a tad of subtlety.A love story?

I suppose a follow-up would be a let-down... we'll do better to just imagine those nine days...... Oh, by the way - I loved it!!!

Lukas

I like that you didn't try to make these two beautiful, with perfect figures, him with a 10" cock and her with 34DD tits. You made them normal kids with an awakening passion for one another. Now I have to use my imagination to what happens in the next nine days.

Fuck up a good story like this and you'll get a bad score from me every time.

You built the story so beautifuly, I can't wait to read the next part. Just wish my sister thought like Jill !

Must get to next part before my hardon goes

I'm a 24 y/o bifem, yet I found the fiction too good and it kept me captivated till I finished the last word!!Kudos to the author. How much I wish I had a sis like Jill and, I the female version of Jake. Its so difficult to even imagine in a country like India ! The likes of Jill may write to me at neha1shere@yahoo.com(But replies will be to females only)

that was the most sissyfied ending to an otherwise good story

What a hot story but I was disappointed in the ending. It just seemed like there should be more! Any chance of further chapters in this story? It was just too good to let it end like this.

Great story and blend of sensual and erotic.

I really like the story, only if there is a part two or a proper ending. It great until that point, then all of a sudden. You rat.

The commentary by "boring" is stupid . This is a wonderful story .

The siblings are going for the gold.

There is always more room for love in the world.

congrats!!!!

This was a great beginning to a beautiful sibling love story. It cries out for another chapter, or perhaps many more.

Here the reader will find a story, layers of emotion. This is not the poor writing of so many others, with its gradual build up it keeps the reader engaged. Your work could serve as a template to others who think they can go from first flush of desire to the obligatory act of Sodomy and threesomes with Mom or Dad in 4 paragraphs. Well done.