All Comments on 'Utter Shock'

Grid iron as one of the major football codes in Australia? That is as likely as me putting shrimps on the barbie.

thanks for the anal tag, saved me from reading 5 pages about a closeted man.

a lovely story!

Good story!

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Thanks for sharing. I look forward to your next.

Cheers

SAGE

To Anonymous's comment re. 'a closeted man'. You're funny - I couldn't be further from what you're inferring if I tried.

This looked until the end like a stand alone out of town romance story but it changed into a first chapter of an intriguing continuing story. More please. Thanks. Good plot and character development. Well-written. Even good back stories, though brief.

An absolutely delightful tale.

For the most part I didn't find this to be where it should be. I really felt it should have been an erotic couple things and not Romance but that last paragraph definitely puts it into the Romantic category. Good luck with your writing I hope to see many more stories out of you

Good, but unfinished.

* * * * * for the story

* * * for the ending

Very well written! You did very well with the emotional connection

Loved it, I have had a couple of younger woan and a young wife. Loved the romance. you are a good writer. I will bet you have lived something like this as I have