All Comments on '"V" is for Veronica'

The writing was very good also....

this is dire.

spelling, punctuation use, of english sentence structure stilted style. she she she she she.

I struggled through most of the first Lit page and had to give up it was just too much work to carry on.

sorry!

I gave up straight away - the Arc de Triomphe is almost due north of the Eiffel Tower, and Notre Dame is away to the east. If you can't get even the most basic things right then I won't bother trying either!

With a little resurch and an editor you could have done something with this story other than waste our time trying to read it.

Hail the nit pickers. They can't read a story for the sake of the story. Instead they try to show off their supposed intellect by picking. This is fiction and damn good fiction at that. One of the great things about fiction is that it doesn't have to be true....it is fiction. So grow up and go show your vitriol somewhere else. I really enjoyed the story, errors and all. Thanks

Enjoyed the story in spite of it's imperfections, seemed to finish abruptly.

Gave it five stars.