All Comments on 'Vacancy Filled'

Just an odd story told in an odd sort of way. Worth a rewrite because there are some good ideas in it

what a great story about a truly fucked up family!

ha! loved it.

for your own culture.

as it is, the two clash rather than work together.

And Jimmy was perfectly right. His mother was acting like a slut. Okay, maybe he was wrong in letting his buddies fuck his mother. My view is that Jimmy's the only one who really has the right to fill "the vacancy" up between his mother's legs. Look, it's his own damn birth canal. I think that Jimmy's the boy who should be blowing his hot young balls up the same cunt he came out of.

I just finished your Volley for Serve series. I'm not usually a "Series" guy at all because i have the attention span of a flea. Plus I don't really hang out in here if you follow me. But that story kept me cumming back for more and that's saying a LOT. So thanks for writing and I look forward to reading more of your work!

P.S. Have you ever considered throwing in some Chem Play, Party Favors and such? It adds a nice dark hue to your already very colorful imagination ;)