All Comments on 'Vacation Gone Wrong-Life Gone Right'

Nice story it could have used a bit more background information on the relationship between Angel and Chase which would have made the story more believable. I noticed one typo where you used hour and it was supposed to be your over all it was a fun read.

I loved how she made the first step. I felt there was enough background between the two main characters. And it was their friendship that allowed the true love to grow. And the fact they worked together,so they saw each other daily probably helped. Because sometimes in real life you spend more time with people at work, than your own family. I loved it...great job! Welldone.

Thank you to everyone who rated the story, left encouraging comments, and for the helpful feedback I need to improve. I'm currently working on a second story and this one will actually be 99% true so I hope you will read it once it is finished. Thanks again, I really appreciate the response I have gotten.

This was a fantastic story! I really liked it. I would give it a 6 out of 5 if I could