All Comments on 'Vacation Isle'

by MountainDewMan

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 5 years ago

Loved it! So fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!!

prop69prop69about 5 years ago
Excellent story

Husband was an ass.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
WOW, WHAT A VACATION!!!!

A TRULY FABULOUS STORY! EXQUISITE. FILLED WITH LOVE BETWEEN A MOTHER WHO LOVES HER SON AND A SON WHO ADORES AND LOVES HIS MOTHER. PLEASE DOA SEQUEL TO THIS. REGRETFULLY I COULD ONLY GIVE YOUR LOVE STORY 5 STARS, IT DESERVES A MINIMUM OF 10. GOOD LUCK. I SHALL LOOK FORWARD TO MORE OF THE SAME FROM YOU.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Sizzling

Masturbating the first night didn't seem to mesh with the pace of the relationship, but that's a minor nit compared to the story's building passion and pace of romance in the story. So well written. The story had elements of feasibility unlike many others. The lovemaking was just as I imagine myself performing in my dreams. *****+

Keep the stories coming (no pun intended).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great Read

Makes me think about when I was young.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Part 2 Coming?

Please continue! They need to have a ceremony, where he can put his rings on her. They can also consummate on their wedding night, by his taking her virgin ass. Maybe the last night of their honeymoon, she comes out of the bathroom holding her preg test.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great Story

Please keep up the Great work .. I Loved this One

linnearlinnearabout 5 years ago
Great Read

That was a great story. I won't lie when they were fucking I was hard as a rock.

2armoured2armouredabout 5 years ago
Very good.

Very good, not much more I can add to that,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
AAA++

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I will be reading more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Lord Kaido

Solo faltaba el anal y se consagraba.

hot36ddhot36ddabout 5 years ago
Hot!

Love your story maybe the best I have read in a long time.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 5 years ago
Really good

Is there part 2 where they take dear ol hubby to the cleaners?

tallman441tallman441about 5 years ago
Excellent!

Good story. I think you need a follow-up to see how they really mess the father up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Not believed.very weak mother. Nuff said.

ROCKY70ROCKY70about 5 years ago
One of the best yet.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOT

I've been gone from Literotica for sometime, I'ts good see new blood at work. Keep up the good work. Thanks for the read

mammoetmammoetabout 5 years ago
loved it

need i say more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
An Anal and Blow job story?

That's the domain of Gays. I began to wonder if either idiot knew where a dick and cum belonged...

DevilbobyDevilbobyalmost 5 years ago
Fucktastic

Found this tale again after a year or so brilliant. Who luvs ya baby. Tis mommy!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Why?

I don’t get the draw of impregnating your mother!!! I’m an extremely open-minded person, but getting mom pregnant, having a kid with your mom who is twice your age??? Someone enlighten me.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Loved the vocal expressions as they fucked

I love a mom and son who aren't afraid to vocally show their enjoyment of each other, especially during their orgasms. Makes me want to go and fuck my mom.

DeanaBardDeanaBardabout 3 years ago

OH ... SOOO ... HOT!!!!

zooliciouszooliciousover 2 years ago

Really glad I found your works. Nice and hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

great story :D

2cookies4u2cookies4uabout 2 years ago

AWESOME! Really loved the buildup until the climax at the resort! Clearly, mom was underappreciated by dad. Mom now knows what it's like to have a real man in her bed. Keep the story coming!

Hillbilly55Hillbilly55over 1 year ago

Just wow! I loved every word. This story got to me, the romance, the passion and the build up to the actual coupling of these two beautiful lovers. My compliments to you sir, you are a very talented writer and I enjoyed this like very few others. Thank you so very much.

mrdata9770mrdata9770over 1 year ago

(10/6/2022) Short but right on point. Very romantic and very erotic. The fact that he mounted and bred her after she willingly submitted to him was a great climax. I hope daddy gets his comeuppance in the sequel. This was an enjoyable read. Five stars!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Blazing frickin HOT. Damn. Thanks for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wow!! Hotter than hot!! Not just hot but expertly written building the sexual tension until it reaches a crescendo. Phew! Great fantasies! Thanks!

ss2ss4ss6ss2ss4ss610 months ago

Great story ruined by getting pregnant. There is nothing erotic about having a baby. Crying, smelly diapers, no sleep, no energy for a passionate couple to make love. Real mood killer!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

There's nothing more refreshing than a thick, hairy bush of maternal crotch fur between a Mom's well ripened thighs. If I were you I would never have the mother trim her pussy hair at all, but allow it to flow out of the gusset of her bikinis and panties naturally. For one thing, this helps to perfume the air with a mother's unique pheromones. But also visually, this confirms the mystery of motherhood to her son in the moments before he breeds her, when everything becomes intimate again. Pushing your cock head in through a dense, unkempt pussy bush is like lifting the veil on your own mother.

rjb426874rjb42687411 days ago

GREAT, GREAT STORY.

I gave you 5 stars because I couldn't give you 10.

I do wish you would write a least 1 more chapter to this story.

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