All Comments on 'Vacation Lust'

so ....reasonable.

I really enjoyed this, I hope there is more to cum.

"She rode me like a wild stallion"

Pretty sure stallions are male horses. Also, a horse riding a person would just be weird. Maybe you mean "She rode me like I was a wild stallion" instead of implying that that a horse rode the guy, which wouldn't have the happy ending this story has.

... but predictable and cliche.

Six or seven paragraphs and he is already thumbing her clit. I thought you had to be over eighteen to drop a story in Literotica. I can't stand these immature all too predictable juvenile efforts. Grow up... get a coach / editor and use creative and believable story development skills. One star for a feeble attempt.