All Comments on 'Vacation Pt. 02: The Photo Shoot'

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linnearlinnearover 4 years ago
Great Follow Up

That was a wonderful second part, please tell us you intend to continue it. I can see this being an amazing series.

Frankie1952Frankie1952over 4 years ago
Good story

Enjoying this and anxious for some real action after a build up like that

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Very nice

Very nice sophomore effort. Love what you did, gradually building up, giving a taste of sex, dropping the mystery between Mom and Lisa on us, and leaving us waiting for more. Still say Mom will end up with a snatch full of James' cock and a mouth full of someone's pussy. Can't wait.to find out. Five.

goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
nice tease, great sex

hard to believe this is your first attempt publishing a story on this site. clever story. looking forward to more chapters.

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