All Comments on 'Vacation with Aunt Victoria Ch. 01'

Damn that was soo hot! Very graphic writer! 🤤🤤🤤💦

Looking forward to the next chapter!

"her breasts were small but perky," NO! NO! NO! You sound like you are insulting her small breasts.

It should read: "her breasts were small AND perky," I LOVE small boobs.

Yeah im gonna need like 4 more chapters atleast lol

Continue with the trip and vacation.

That was a beautiful story I hope that there are many more to cum!!

I can hardly wait for part 2!

PLEASE continue this story

I like the way you think! I hope we see many more!

Writer's Note: I should of included in the original notes that comments were welcomed, and even encouraged. Will include that when I edit it sometime later.

Chapter two teaser: I've already started working on this, and picks up right where this story leaves off. However it is from Aunt Victoria's point of view.

I agree with you anonymous, I will probably edit this to be "her breasts were small, perky, and perfect."

YaBoiBigChungus7 (how could that name have possibly needed a 7at the end? but that's beyond the point). This story is planned out for 5 chapters, and 2 other short stories involving the same characters right now.

Amazing can't wait to read morr

That was good, thanks for sharing!

There just has to be more right? ;) Great first story

WOW...

Been there, in S.Carolina, plleeeaaassseee continue the trip/vacation 🙂😉

DAMN! You have me wound up. More---

We want more, we want more!! Awesome start to a possible long series.

Excellent beginning! Keep it up.

Very nice ! Can't wait for more !

Great start to vacation. Please keep going

Excellent first story

Excellent

So nicely built up, it exploded in the finish. Makes me want one more. Let's me hope it can happen again in real life. Thank you, looking forward to more.

I think, from a professional perspective, that our Ms. Victoria is in need of some serious therapy, and we can only hope that Our Boy is up to the task. A lot...of very vigorous therapy.

Great story. Hope we get more chapters. 5 stars

Great first story! Cannot wait for the next one!!

Loved it

Excellent, especially for your first story! Can't wait to see where this goes...

Excellent want more

Great first story, hope there is more to follow

Great first story. You have most readers waiting for the next chapter. I hope it will not take you very long.

Thank you for sharing.

GOOOOOd job !!!!!

Pretty good stroke story but it lacked the tension and longing that usually makes incest stories great. It’s obvious that he had a crush on her since he was 14, but why was she such an exhibitionist and so sexually forward with him? You should give a little more background on the characters motives to make the story more enjoyable and believable. From what we know, she was not very sexually active before marrying the older guy, which doesn’t jive with the woman who masturbated in from of her nephew who was a practical stranger. I liked the characters and the situation, I just wish there was more substance.

Fantastic first story. Hope there is a follow up. The only thing I have to say, slow the pace a little. As always thanks for taking the time to write.

If she does not end up pregnant it will be a damn shame ,because of her backstory .

Good start and great writing but I agree with UAlbany girl's opinion! Keep it up though!

Nice beginig and a very promising story.Keep up the good work Congrats.

You need to write a novel. Erotica definitely, but romance as well, if you were at all interested in making this a profession - which you could. This is as objective as I can be: Start to write something, and at around a hundred and fifty pages, plan for it to be published.

5 stars. Smoking hot little story.

Next Chapter!!!

A great start. Cant wait for the next chapter

Superb…let’s have more please

love to come in a woman's mouth...

Great story and good job in writing. Can’t wait for the next installment.

Fantastic story! Can’t wait for more. Thank you very much.

Awesome. Thank you.

Great first story, hope there will be another.

Great story and even better considering it's your first. Some typos and errors to work out, and I agree that it went a little too quickly, but not so much that the story was hurt by it.

Yeah best sex for me too! Can;t wait to visit Aunt Tori again!

Bring on chapter 2! I loved this story. Not to slow, just the right amount of sex

I read about to the stop for burgers and could not keep going. Maybe I am too sensitive but I can’t concentrate on a story with this many mechanical issues. Dudette, you need to work on your grammar, spelling and punctuation. Or get help from a volunteer editor. Thank you for your story; keep going and with a bit of practice and some help you will improve.

Loved it. Would love to see more.

Awesome story and very easy to follow! I look forward to chapter 2!

More please!

This really did it for me. Sure, spelling and grammar could use some tightening up, but the whole thing was hot as hell. More please.

I hate when folks want to complain about grammar or punctuation on a great story like this. Chapter two please, and don’t wait for the English professors to approve it!

MOOORE!!!!!!!

You’re an incredible writer! Can’t wait to read more!

Content is good. You don't have to change your writing to catch the spelling, timezone etc but if you get an editor from this very site they'll catch all that for you.

Many women tghink that jerking me off, with just the head of my cock in her mouth is a blowjob..

Love the story so far. I hope you continue it.

I will be waiting for the followup story as this continues to follow them while in Myrtle Beach

Wow, one hellofa start. That's one Hot Aunt. Hurry bring us more. 5 stars!

I did love your story and looking forward to ch 02

I hope there is a pt 2, that was great, they came to life

Wow! I sure hope you share more stories.

Loved. It. Very hot.

So very hot. I was hard the whole story please write more

Please write more so hot

Is there going to be a part 2?

This is so good can't wait for a part 2