All Comments on 'Vacation with Dad'

by James_Steele

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DevilbobyDevilbobyabout 4 years ago
Powerful!

Isn't that just how is between teenaged daughters and their dad's sometimes, I know it was with mine. Although not incestuous, the friendship we now have is irreplaceable even though she is now a married woman with a child.

DunkirkDunkirkabout 4 years ago

He needs to keep filling her cunt with his seed until she begins to reveal a growing baby bump

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518about 4 years ago

Great story, well paced. I love the slow, methodical approach you took and slow-played their sexual contact. But once they crossed the incest line, the action was fast, furious and very, very erotic. Well done!

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 4 years ago

Love the idea of the dad and daughter on the nude beach! Five stars and a favorite point!

BEERQUACKBEERQUACKabout 4 years ago
good read

how about another chapter at home??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Outstanding

Great pace. 5* and favorite.

360 should have been 180 but took nothing away from a spectacular read.

HragsHragsabout 4 years ago

Cool story. U can ad more chapters . think evryone would like it.

SexyBBWHazeleyesSexyBBWHazeleyesabout 4 years ago

Loved it. Enjoyed them being at the nude beach. Can't wait till the next story of them living together and enjoying each other by the pool being naked...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Daughter

My dream vacation with my daughter. 5*

LickmecleanLickmecleanalmost 3 years ago

Rubbing my wet pussy while reading this. So good

Burcham8Burcham8over 2 years ago

Hot! I hope you expand this. It’d make a great little series…!!!

wish_thinkerwish_thinkerover 2 years ago

Beautiful, I only wish it had a huge number of follow ups!

Maisy_PMaisy_Pabout 2 years ago

This is a masterful treatment of a titillating topic. So sexy and fun to read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

GREAT STORY BUT NEEDED ANOTHER CHAPTER

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fantastic. Need Part 2 of the next Vacation in a country where public nudity and sex is more open

Nekomusume_DaisukiNekomusume_Daisuki12 months ago

This one could indeed have done with a 2nd (and possibly a 3rd) chapter!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I liked the story but not well enough to read a third by the same author

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

That was so very hot!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Pretty hot and sweet, but given the nature of the story, it would be nice to know if she had been saving herself for dad. I mean you'd think she would, but there was no mention of it either way. Feels like a big oversight. I guess you get lost with the story sometime and forget some of the little, important details :)

olblueyesolblueyes6 months ago

nasty,,nasty,,loved it,,very erotic,, exciting fantasy, but of course she will ultimately want a man to marry and have kids with,,,and take care of daddy on the side!! lol, but thats an other category,,

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