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Click here"It's shrinking," she said, puzzled because Jake was as hard as ever. Earlier her jaw had been aching from how wide it needed to be, and he had nudged impatiently at her throat, but now he was scarcely bigger than her index finger.
"Shut up," Jake growled, pushing her away. Moments later he gave a terrified screech as his hand discovered the truth of it. "What the fuck!" he screamed. "What the fuck!"
Hurriedly zipping up his trousers, he raced off towards the park exit, leaving a bemused Carla still on her knees. "I really hope that doesn't happen next time," she murmured.
"It won't," a semi-familiar voice said from the shadows. It was the dark-haired girl who had caused all the day's trouble. The lesbian florist. "How do you like the new you?"
Carla laughed with pure joy. "Ask me again in a month..."
- COMMENTS
bigurn2 months agoWhile a interesting story concept in the beginning... It morphed into a story of the MC being ass raped by a cop. After that, this chapter hardly mentioned him. Instead turning into a story about a transsexual slut, formally known as Carl. Just curious as to why the total change of focus occured. Sorry, but only 3 Stars due to lack of continuity. Thanks for your submissions though.
AlinaXover 2 years agoAuthorI think fembots are entertaining as a concept but not very interesting as characters. I could never write a serious story about a boy barely into manhood having a deep relationship with his sex-toy mother. It's far more interesting to write a story about John's wishes coming true and yet he's never the one in control. Ultimately this is Vale's story, even if she's the one character whose head we never get into. We see her through the impact she has on other characters. And despite it all being daft as hell, it does all connect up in the end.
Purplefizzover 2 years agoLoved it, V is such a force of chaos (channeling a bit of Loki?), which of course logically leads to a chaotic storyline - and I’m all for a slightly de-structured nutso story once in a while.
Maybe I’ve got it wrong but this seems to be escapism and fun for the author, not having to obey the rules or conventional story writing, I get the feeling you’re writing this purely for yourself AlinaX and fun of not having pay attention to the mundane. Maybe I’m wrong tho! Still 5* btw ;-)
AlinaXover 2 years agoAuthorFair criticism. The chapters are short, but all six are written and are coming out quickly after each other, and they do actually tie together in the end.
