All Comments on 'Valentimes: Worst and Best of Times'

Enjoyed your "Valentimes" story very much, I loved the characterisation and the way the couple came together. That's it for these two but please keep writing.

I started out thinking ...I wonder if she knows somebody like that...so negative it made me shivver....then you injected LIGHT and I started grinning!! Ahh...Kabul,...well, that's a buzzkill...put in Magil 3 times...duh...autofill...anyhoo, thank you...Sweet And Clever.

I so enjoyed this story 💖 I laughed out loud several times, which I needed. But, sure hated Cynthia...... great work 👏 looking forward to seeing more of your work

Magil’s personality changed dramatically and she was no longer the spiritual person from the night before. The mysticism died and what replaced it was a bunch of same-old same-old screwing. Sorry. A stretch to make it 4*.

For me, this was another delicious story. I’m wondering if the author is a non-native speaker of English due to the number of times that the ending of words indicating single or plural was omitted. I noticed this in another story by the same author. There are also some places that the word itself is incorrect but close. All in all the story is much better than some others I have read.