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All Comments on 'Valentine's Day - The Whole Story'

by Quinn_McMullen

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I can only hope mine comes out the same.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hmmm. I'm thinking your bi-line was supposed to say "unrequited" love. Rookie mistake for someone with 20 stories under their belt. Maybe check more closely next time.

muskyboymuskyboyalmost 2 years ago

FTDS. 3/5 for not finishing this story. Also, what were Helen and SImon's problems, seems like a huge part of this story was missing?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Assume a part 2? Otherwise, why such a chopped unemotional ending?

MikodaMikodaalmost 2 years ago

Reads like a simp manual. Fit's with all the questionable males on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It had/has the potential for rating a 5 star, assuming there's a second part. Otherwise, an unemotional, abrupt conclusion, which is unlike your other reads.

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Same pointless story exaggerated from the 750 word project --> waste of time reading this

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A collaboration that Erin Page and I put together has been published. It combined her Virginia Beach stories and my Gabrielle story. Here is the link: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=6246638&page=submissions I strongly recommend Erin's Virginia Beach st...