All Comments on 'Valentines Day Train'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Trains have both all people cum and the sex scenes rushed with very little detail

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Lovely fantasy. Poorly written, obviously not an English speaker but a great premise.

But come on, one of these women would have had to end up with a load dropped in her. Noone has that kind of control.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good twist! Very steamy.

GinafrommaineGinafrommaineover 2 years ago

Nice story. The ending sucked. I would never leave a guy hanging, with blue balls.

MedicalpeteMedicalpeteover 2 years ago

Yeah, I liked it! Good luck with the comp and I hope you’re not left hanging like he was!!!

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