All Comments on 'Valentine's Ghost'

I guess it worked out in the end, but it seemed dishonest to me.

The Wonder Woman reference was fun. Good story.

Well in was interesting story but fast and short story it get be better honestly speaking as a reader I get from point a to b maybe adjust it bit more where it develops in better I do get the POV of the mother's it just hmmm not captivating the readers attention sex scene seem bit vanilla not much engaging the readers imagination like they can picture the scene in their head aka our heads mind feel more in tune with your story if you can do that it help your skills as writer and storyteller well I did like I was about give this story a 3 star but I can see potential in story to be come a 5 star so I gave it official at the this moment a 4 star hope see improvement I add to favorites hope see if you improve the story but more well take care hope the feed back was helpful I hope.

That's it?