All Comments on 'Valentine's Interrupted'

Soon Tom will be sucking Brad's cock like he should.

Disgusting story.

You’re really saying that Sam would not only cheat on her husband despite their strong, lifelong relationship, but with his own sister’s ex, on his birthday…the same guy who ruined his dinner and she herself called a slimeball?

The cock isn’t lining up, but Rarmons fucked this story anyway

I always hate stories like this, not because of the cheating wife, that goes with the LW territory, but because of the backstabbing family. How can Amy do this to her brother. If she and Brad want to have a threesome or be in a polyship which they clearly do by taking Sam on their honeymoon, surely she can pick someone who isnt her brother's wife. I know not all families are perfect, my own relationship with my siblings can attest to that, but even I know that no matter our faults we would have each others back when it really mattered. Brad is an arsehole, Sam is a whore, Dave is a wimp, but Amy is a psychotic bitch for doing this to her own brother.

That's not love, it is pure whipped dog material. You might as well have been her slave or pet.

5 star on stupidity and I have met some very stupid people.

Confusing Femdom agitprop. I don’t understand how this could happen except in a cartoon version of Life.

that was some great trolling

You make me puke as a writer. He should have shot the ashole!!

I’ll never read your Scumball shit again!!!

albertin55@gmail.com

Crap

this was disgusting. what a fucking loser

This was the most pitiful story ever written

One cock torpedos a lifetime’s worth of a perfect relationship?

Did Brad’s cock give Sam brain damage? Was it big enough to hit Tom in the head too, turning him into a vegetative cuck?

Nothing here that a 12 lb sledgehammer can't fix...

Sam writes children’s books huh?

Is one of them called “Mommy is a Cheating Whore?”

Fuck this bullshit story

Idiots don't die out. This author and his story are an example of that! At least the author still has hope that he will get therapeutic help.

DESTROY THE CHEATING BITCH AND BRAD TOO

fuck off

Bullshit story

Delete this story. Then take the device you used to write it and burn it. Then bury the remains. In the middle of the fucking desert

What a repugnant story

The Loving Wives category is definitely not your area of expertise. There isn't a shred of believability here, particularly after you developed Sam & Tom as having a solid, loving relationship, just to see Sam become someone *COMPLETELY* different, particularly when we never see things from Sam's perspective. Even Brad, asshole as that character is, likely wouldn't be as obtuse as you portray. The last half of this story just leaves me feeling sad & wondering how I'm going to get those 15 wasted minutes back.

This is one of those stories that makes you just hate life

1*

Fuck OFF Rarmons

I feel sad for anyone who gets off or accepts things like this

Barf.......

No leave her she will do it again

Krap. Needing bro to call him a cab, but he can call his own friend with his own phone?

No, not good at all. Might explain the one star scores.

From a storyline point of view, it was terrible. Well written but story pathetic.

... I’d have just introduced her to my fist/hand. It’d make her too loose for Brad to feel anything. “Hey. You ruin her for me? I ruin her for you” as he watched me pump a my birthday celebratory champagne bottle in and out of her prolapsed asshole with my fist buried deep in her gaping cunt.

...it’s so well written.

One fault. I cannot believe how easy San turned — the dreaded Brad Slut Ray. There should have been a little more reticence. Also, I totally don’t believe Amy would have agreed to all this.

For content I give it a 2-star. But for actual writing I give it 4-stars.

I think you are fucking faggot

Cuckold.

JUST DON'T READ THIS SHIT.

SAVE YOUR SOUL.

this one is very bad

I liked it so much I gave it a one.

MrBill

I hate all these characters so much that my hands are literally shaking, I had to take a short walk. But it is the type of story (cuckold) that set me off as I very much enjoy many other stories by this author. I am sure there are categories I like that others hate. I should have looked closer at the rating, I hate having to go to the end of the story for the key words.

I hate cuckold but enjoy a good BTB/revenge story. Would love a chapter 2 where he wakes up, grows a spine and burns them all. It might at least even me out.

I laughed all the way through this. Too funny.

Good Satire.

SHIT

Author: Go away and stay away

5 stars! Immediately one if my favorites. This is a great story. 2 best moments when he inevitably reached around and rubbed her tits and then when she crawled after him. I scanned your other stories and didn’t see many in a similar theme maybe you could recommend some.

SHIT

Fuck you for writing this

Stories shit

Shit story about a spineless wimp and his cold-hearted whore wife

Everyone who gives this story a bad rating is like me.

At the first sign we would be into the house and return with lethal force and deal with the threat.

Sexual assault is a serious crime.

And we are mad as hell and we are not going to take it anymore.

Enough said.

Fuck you

the lowest score is a 1. it deserves 10 times less. WIMP

I see why how people didn't like this story. I hate it when authors post stories like this and it gets negative reviews and bad ratings because of the sensitive people. I like all kinds of stories on LIT and it was nothing wrong with this one. Don't get me wrong, there's no way in hell I'll allow what Brad did. The husband was a bitch

I see why how people didn't like this story. I hate it when authors post stories like this and the sensitive people cries at how "Trash" the story is and gives it a bad rating. I like all kinds of stories on LIT. This world ain't all unicorns and rainbows

The good 'ole Martian slut ray is in action...again.

How ANY male could sit in a hot tub and let that crap take place is beyond me.

Not a believable story line.

As I sometimes axk, does this excite some people, or is it intended to say "Your life isn't this bad." Divorce her. Beat the guy with a baseball bat.

Jeez!!! How can anybody publish such a crappy cucky wimp story??

One sick story

I don't know how I was unfortunate enough to come across this piece of shit for the second time in less than a year, but this time it grated on me even more. Fuck off!

I'm as broadminded as anybody , or so I thought , until this.......... You need help mate .

But I really didn't enjoy this story

This was the worst. My fucking god, was this bad!

I am sorry butI don’t like this kind of story. I will not read any more of your stories.

A wimp is a wimp and it sucks. Good bye.

Fuck you

I'm all for cuck stories but dude, this is putting a man in a position that makes suicide like winning the lottery. Fuck this. I thought things would end up looking like she would cheat but then just be sexual tension before he got his wish, maybe a 3way but what the fuck man.

1) What kind of wife is Sam? How could she cheat on her husband so brazenly on his birthday? How could she cut him off from sex and get knocked up by a man other than him, and that he can’t stand? Heartless slut

2) What kind of ‘friend’ is Brad? He’d turn down a taxi fare because ‘friends don’t do that’ yet he’ll fuck Tom’s wife? How can he claim to love Amy then fuck her brother’s wife? Brain-dead asshole

3) How could Amy not only condone her husband fucking around, but that too, allow him to fuck her brother’s wife, and get her pregnant, on their honeymoon? She has no right to call herself a sister, the cunt

4) What the fuck kind of masochist is Tom to take it all?

5) Why is it that I agree with the comments saying that this is Literotica’s worst story? Why did you bother writing this fucking tale of toxicity?

Obe star

Go fuck yourself rarmons

Cries because a ruined cake fucks up her husband’s birthday

Fucks a guy her husband hates on his birthday, cuts him off, gets pregnant and smiles

How the fuck is she not being treated for being schitzo? Why didn’t Tom murder her?

Rarmos, you pathetic cunt...

We have a winner, ladies and gentlemen! Worst story every written in the history of the world!!!

Congratulations, rarmons! Now, fellas, let’s form a queue! Tonight, his wife is gonna fuck every man in the building but him!!

(He gets to jerk off to his one star performance as a man)

Some stories leave you feeling completely repulsed. This was one of them. I’d recommend finding something to make you laugh afterwards, if you’re unlucky enough to end up reading this pathetic ‘story’. Stay away from relationship jokes - this is hideous enough to leave a sour taste in your mouth about loving someone. I read it three hours ago and I’m still bitter about it

I wish we could give stories a 0, because this deserves it

This has got to be the worst thing I have ever read in my life

You give homosexuals a bad name. its the 21st century be out and proud not some closeted piece of shit, masquerading as a straight guy . God I hate this fucking crap

Rarmons deserves to be murdered for writing this piece of shit

...is loathsome creature. Not human

You’re a raving loon

The author had a stroke halfway through and lost his fucking mind. 1*

With this cuckold fucking story. The author’s not a fucking man. 1*

Tragic...and im not just talking about the story

You are a BAD writer. Your terrible story redefines the word ‘bad’. I think you need counseling

I thought I was reading a decent story. Shame it turned into a cuckfest. 1* and I’d question your sanity, rarmons

Faggot-ass writer. your a closet cuck who likes to jizz over cuck porn, cause no women will give yo fag ass pussy and no guy will fuck yo fag ass

This gets a one star. It’s so bad it’s not even goid. It’s so bad, it makes Matt Moreau look like a literary genius. Congratulations, you’ve written the worst story in the history of Literotica

I wouldn’t use this story as toilet paper. It’s hideous

*sigh* this is the first story I’ve ever read by rarmons. And the last. I’m not even going to dignify this with a vote

Why the fuck did you write this shit? Only cuckokded gimps like you who have never had a pussy around their cock would beat off to this. Kill yourself

I feel like punching the author in the face. He/she should be ashamed of themselves for getting off on this. A big fat zero stars

What is so erotic about having to masturbate and being humiliated.

You must be pathetic. Anyway, I hope you enjoy watchinh your wife fuck her lover this Christmas. Maybe you can get lucky with the turkey? Dumb cuck. 1*

Do you suck your sister’s husband’s cock after it’s been in your wife’s pussy, scoop the remaining cum out of the whoring cunt, then use those fingers to type, you retarded chastised cuckfuck? Is that why you jacked off to this story and gave it a 5? You fucking limp fuck

You’re one twisted individual

I hope your sister stabs you in the cock with a knofe, and you bleed out watching her husband fuck your wife. Useless fucking cunt

He an insane retarded fag fool who sucks and swallows!!!

The worst story I've ever read. Considering we have Matt Moreau on here, that says a lot

I hate the author for this story

I hope someone kills the author in its (yeah, it) sleep. Sick fucking creature

Good trolling. LOL

ONE STAR, of course.

Just another closet faggot. So whens hubby going to start sucking sisters husbands cock oh sorry he's been doing it all along.

All that build up to produce some stupid cuckold crap? Next time give a warning beforehand please!

Don't know how I became unlucky enough to ended up reading this sad, pathetic, nonsensical, angering tale of cuckolding. But I did... and the fucking thing has been bothering me, on and off, for so long, I had to re-read it. Which made it makes even less sense.

'Wanna know what's the worst part about this story? rarmons is actually a good writer. Most of his other stories proved themselves to be good - OK, only read his incest tales (not into the trans stuffs), but every else is getting high marks, and what I checked definitely deserved it, IMO.

But f**k if I understand what the hell he was thinking when he wrote this. Not gonna lie: the sex scene was really well written. But what happen before and, especially, afterwards? FTS! Completely illogical nonsense. Hate every single characters here, but hate even more the fact I have no idea what the f**ck is going on in their heads, ESPECIALLY THE MAIN PROTAGONIST/NARRATOR, which kinda shows how badly this story was written. What, this loser loves his slutty wife hard enough to let her fuck around on him RIGHT IN HIS FACE, but he's also so in love with the tramp, is A-OK with never using his dick for inside of her for the REST OF HIS LIFE???? Mofo wasn't even conditioned to this - this shit just fall on him all of a sudden... but love we still managed to kick those two crazy kids together??? C'MON!!!! And don't get me start with the sister (geezus krist, that effing cunt of a sister...) and their pathetic excuse of parents - there's no goddamn way those two aren't aware what their new son-in-law have done to their son's mariage... and they're cool with that!? Imagine for a second being the father of those degenerates... it's hard to come up for a better excuse for disownment. Or a better proof that you're a failure as a parent.

... Urgh. I know a story is just a story, but I wish rarmons came out of his retirement where either Tom move on with his life (after getting serious therapy sessions), Tom go full torch-earth against the group of a-holes that betrayed him... or Tom simply killed himself. Him just taking it as it is is implausible... but I guess this is all we're going to get here, and, because of it, I truly hope nobody ever bother wasting the time to read it.

5 to offset the asshole anonymous'

author's a fagcuckie

The funny thing is the people that write stories like this you themselves as the other guy when in reality they are the husband

This is one of those stories that really makes you angry. And the worse thing is you can't do anything about it, I really wish someone would write a second part where the husband gets revenge, and as a result maybe a harem.

Another husband can't do shit but sit and stare as his wife gets fu**ed story. Give us all a break and change the outcome were the husband beats the crap out of the ass hole wannabe interloper.

Nothing redeems this one. You really ought to pull it and burn it if you can.

You cannot be serious!!!!

What a piece of shit.

a mess