All Comments on 'Valerie'

She's a hooker. "Deserve" doesn't come into it.

An Amsterdam fairy tale. He has unprotected sex with a prostitute (no need to puzzle about what souvenir he'll be bringing home), who then gives him his cash back? Sorry, but it was utterly unbelievable.

How I wish I had really met and bedded Valerie. But this story, like my others, is a fantasy. I find that condoms don't show up in my fantasies.

There have been no comments for a long time on your story, but I hope, you can still read it: I liked it a lot and it's a fan fantasy. I cannot understand the criticism that she's a hooker and probably full of STDs. This is a fantasy story. Why can't people just enjoy a good read and be done with it?!

I prefer to concentrate on what is enjoyable, not on the realism when I read erotic fantasy.