All Comments on 'Valerie Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
WOW

THIS SERIES IS SO CAPTURING. I STARTED IN THE MIDDLE AND HAD TO GO BACK AND READ THE OTHER STORIES AND THEN CATCH UP WITH THE REST. I AM A SUBMISSIVE MYSELF, JUST FINDING MY OWN. THIS STORY SHOWS SO MUCH OF WHAT I FELT, AND HAVE SEEN, AND HEARD.

THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT.

libertarianlibertarianabout 17 years ago
Best

This is definitely the best chapter so far. I am anxiously awaiting the final chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Absolutely amazing.

Your writing ability has left me speechless. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
wonderful just wonderful

i love this series and im sad that there is only one more chapter left. i cant wait to read it!!

libertarianlibertarianalmost 15 years ago
Editing

I really do love this story. I have read some parts before on an individual basis, but not the whole thing through. Now that I have, I really find that your out of order parts really irritate me. Some events seem to take place days before other events. It would be much better if you could re-edit each chapter chronologically.

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