All Comments on 'Valley of the Woods Ch. 01'

I look forward to how this goes and wish you the best with your writing.

If you're going to include non human or scifi stuff in your story, warn the reader before the story. Having said that keep going and good luck.

It was an interesting start, I was confused most of the story and there were a few errors. Either write more or get a beta reader to point out the gaps.

Keep on writing.