All Comments on 'Val's Dark Desire'

Storyline was fine, although it's working through a lot of the cuckold cliches. My complaint about the writing is the author's lack of mastery with verb tenses. Past and present tenses are intermixed, which just leads to confusion.

As for the Anonymous haters, thank you for the humor you provide. I have no doubt that you are boys who scream at the rain because you think it will make the sun shine. The Loving Wives category clearly invites stories about unfaithful wives. Don't like it? Stop reading. Most cuckold stories clearly indicate what they are. Don't like it? Stop reading. "Val's Dark Desire" as a title tells you that what the story will be. If you know it's going to wound your tender little male parts, then don't read it. And PLEASE stop labeling every cuckold "gay" just because he licks up semen and it makes you go woozy inside. You only reveal your own paranoia, which is obviously you over-compensating for...well, talk to your therapists. And have him kick up your meds and take away your internet. Then you can spend your days staring at football players' asses.

Congrats!!!

It figures you would like this.Bashing others for not liking this? Stupid.BTW Kentucky when did humiliation leap from fetish to Loving Wives? Or is that just part of the cuckold gig. The wife must totally emasculate her husband for you fetishists to get off.Sure seems that way.No?

wwwwwwwwow story after long time

Very well done, I like this story and how it progressed through what could have been a difficult scene. Truth is I have met two couples who have similar beginnings to a hotwife or cuckold relationship although pregnancy was not part of their story.

This story has room to continue into a very hot interracial cuckold lifestyle. Keep doing what you are doing there are many of us that appreciate your writing.

Nicely defined characters, a mostly wholesome wife who isn't a slut, slowly mounting tension with some resistance.

Easily 5 stars

This was by far the best story of the week - including all that burn the bitch crap published on the 4th. 5*

I bet your fellow Kentuckians would like to kick your ass out of the state. Cucks like you belong in fetish. I'm so happy that you get a kick out of reading comments. So do I, especially the ones made by ass wipes like you. Don't you feel ashamed admitting this was erotic?

the start wasn't promising (watching a video) but hearing the wife telling her husband-slowly and steadily- about the affair she was having was a real turn-on. I like that you focused on the emotional aspects of both the affair and the relationship with the cuckold. It makes the sex that much more exciting! Please keep writing!

Hey semen slurp. Did your cunt kick you out of the wrong side of the bed this morning? Oh no, she hasn't come home yet with your cream pies she collected last night for your breakfast. Sorry, keep on licking, don't want to interrupt your breakfast. Only a sick fucking pervert would consider something like this good story telling.

And there are many more that consider this nothing but the normal trash thrown into loving wives to see if it will stick. Interracial cuckolding? Does loving wives spell Interracial. There isn't a score low enough to give this author. If you haven't noticed yesterday every story but two made well over four star scoring, with five receiving the red "H" . What does that tell you what the readers prefer? It isn't this shit.

Miguel,

Thanks, this story made my day. Hope you have time to post again soon. Each story is so well written and the characters so believable. Very well done, love reading your work.

Todd

Well written,, not over the top,, to the detractors, go to romance and read those boring stories...your comments reveal you to be insecure wimps.

You're so lucky that a Black Phallus has entered your lives and marriage. African Creampie is Cerridwen's Cauldron. Drink deeply from it, for the cuckold's path to Enlightenment is long and arduous. Your seed will fall to the ground many times as the superior Black Bull breeds your wife.

more cuck shit.

kick the bitch to the curb with her bastard kids

The story was well-told, but I'm not fond of the "cuck" this and "cucky" that. I would have liked it better if it was portrayed as more of a polyamours relationship, with everyone on an equal footing.

Also, should Val be drinking alcohol knowing she's pregnant? Fetal Alcohol Syndrome is very real !

Terrible story and wrong category!

I had a feeling when I started reading this story where it was going. I skipped to the end and quickly realized I'd never again read anything by this author. Lesson learned.

Perhaps it could have been in the Interracial category. Maybe literotica needs to have a cuckold section. I especially prized the emotional connections.

Hot hot!

Thanks for sharing.

Now if the smell of sh*t could translate into the written word....well

1 star! Terrible story, I just hate the cuckstories...

1/2 star for all that effort for such a bad story.