All Comments on 'Vampire and His Mate Ch. 03'

by SexyLittleWolf45

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lucianloverlucianloverabout 13 years ago
You know what...............?

This is good,really good.But what will make this better will be a story interspersed with these scenes otherwise this becomes a quick-fix story when it can be so much more.For instance a story about how they met,or even some dialogue will be nice and very much appreciated.

NightpleasureNightpleasureabout 13 years ago

Something more then sex. Though sex is really great, it's missing a story.

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