by manyeyedhydra
I was going to give this five stars anyway for the intelligent, non-romantic depiction of vampirism; and didn't notice the author's name until I finished. Another solid story.
Another original innovative story weaving horror and eroticism together in a seamless manner.
Long live killer breasts!
Should've been in the competition.
I've often thought how powerful it is to have large breasts that are so desired. I never envisioned the possibility of weaving an erotic horror tale such as this!
Your creativity should be commended as it was not a scary horror story but an arousing tale of the dark side that has left me WET beyond my belief!
Thank you for posting this!
Kisses,
Steph
has done it again. Thank you. It was a great treat, what am I going to read now??????Oh mayby I just go back and "visit" with Phill? How is he?? Is he ever going to come out and play??? Say "HI" from me.
have mentioned "A Succubus for Halloween". Is this a different story? Has it been posted here???
Always nice to see the bad guys get theirs, hate it when you kill off nice guys in your stories. Good stuff.
A silly title for an excellent story. Acarina's a great character. The 'choice' is a nice bit of self-deception on her part. It makes her a much more rounded (heheh) character. Great work!
Corruption is soooo sexy. The way you have Acarina act so softly and suggestively, all while draining the life out of her prey put me over the edge!!!!!
Your title immediately piqued my interest as I am Romanian myself and wanted to see how horribly butchered the representation of Romanians was. I was not disappointed. First, most Romanians aren't blond, they are black or brown haired, but no biggie really. Second, Acarina is not a Romanian name, Florea or Viorica are much more common and distinctly Romanian. Third, the accent is all wrong, Romanians pronounce w's normally you gave her a German accent.
I agree with another poster that the final choice wasn't really a choice. He had made his choice earlier on when he tried to get her breasts off of him, but she didn't let him go. Interesting story.
A fun read and interesting means of feeding. Agreed on other comments, the choice was no more than playful seduction. I did wonder if she'd let him live but blank his memory. Then again, did he deserve to. The trade is is in with no thought other than money.