by LukasGrey
nuanced, a great web of characters to make him more believable. Want more! Hope it does not get too soap-opera-y. For once I cannot predict where this will go, Richer than most stories here. Keep up the great work. Please continue!
More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More! More!.
The characters, the dialogue, the richness!!! All superb. Gimme 20 more chapters, please!
I’m not much into the bdsm stories, but I had read your other stories, and really like your writing. I’m enjoying this story, I like the way you’ve made it more about the characters than about the sex. Hope you keep writing I could read several more chapters.
Please don’t give up on “ what the heart wants” either.
Thanks for your effort. K.S.