All Comments on 'Vannerbehn's Luck Pt. 02'

I was trying to figure out what I was going to read next. This was a wonderful instalment. I really enjoyed how our hero has a soft spot for the down trodden and cares about people. Looking forward to more

Pamna has been a naughty witch, shame on her for putting a truth spell on our hero. She knew he was going to see his girlfriend. I do believe she was a tad jealous, or possible she was sent there to move him back to the ladies crew? Hmmm... lots of ways this could be heading. I do love your works, they always keep my attention.

I really like this series - I have a weakness for a rogue (or in my case, a spy, assassin, and private investigator named Jon Chess) with a heart of gold!

Glad to see how you slowed down on this part of the tale.

Now we know about Bance and that he would try to off our protagonist, and Pamna surprised us with appearing at the Gale. I find it slightly curious that her crew asked her to follow him, but the obvious thing is that Pamna kind of sowed the seed of interest with at least 2 of her compatriots with the little tidbit she shared with them that night she spent with Kelsen.

Malena's adorable and quite the character, and I'm interested in how she'll fit in, although Kelsen's already bidding her goodbye at this point; Pamna's hedging to include him in more of her party's adventures.

Loved the slower pacing and greater detail, which made for a great intervening chapter. 5